tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2771384116306244330.post2322585295714579179..comments2023-11-03T10:54:12.121-04:00Comments on This Is Not My Day Job: The First Line, ContinuedUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2771384116306244330.post-73964799119005402382009-06-01T02:00:59.344-04:002009-06-01T02:00:59.344-04:00Now that was a very very unexpected ending..Felt I...Now that was a very very unexpected ending..Felt I'd fallen flat from a staircase that ends abruptly up in the air.<br /><br />The climax could have been more enticing, but I have still decided to like it. Were I the editor I'd given it a green. :)Ann Deehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03628922409430892225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2771384116306244330.post-40986438691235895982009-05-02T13:42:00.000-04:002009-05-02T13:42:00.000-04:00Guinevere - cute story. Keep writing!
Just wanted...Guinevere - cute story. Keep writing!<br /><br />Just wanted to thank you for following Don't Be a Slut.<br /><br />glad I discovered your blog.Don't Be a Sluthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17122764044602859402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2771384116306244330.post-39001275437358535382009-05-01T02:28:00.000-04:002009-05-01T02:28:00.000-04:00Thank you, Morrow! Sometimes I wonder if my perfec...Thank you, Morrow! Sometimes I wonder if my perfect girl's flaw is a little too much for people to publish (my writer's group was amused, but shocked), so it's nice to have the positive feedback. :)<br /><br />Stephanie, thank you so much for the suggestion! The story rings in at 916 so it might have a chance. I am going to check out their site.Guineverehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058786129073896210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2771384116306244330.post-26771296136953092582009-04-30T23:15:00.000-04:002009-04-30T23:15:00.000-04:00Really interesting story. If it's under 1000, you ...Really interesting story. If it's under 1000, you can submit to Flash Me magazine...www.wingedhalo.com. My story was chosen as their feature in their January 09 issue.Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17401931638397651614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2771384116306244330.post-21191934724737057722009-04-28T23:00:00.000-04:002009-04-28T23:00:00.000-04:00Wow. That was amazing. The description of her is s...Wow. That was amazing. The description of her is so perfect and the ending such a contrast and what a clever idea for a story. I can see why you like this so much.morrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14748674447965504830noreply@blogger.com